Monday, September 13, 2021

Me and My Angels #UMeU

You bring fresh air in my life,

the air that I breath.

You fill my heart with love, 

the reason my heart beats.

You make me feel proud,

the achievements which you endowed.

You bring a ray of hope,

the hope that make this world a better place to lodge

You are love of my life, 

the love that makes me alive

You are the strength in my life, 

the strength that makes me shine. 

You are the dream of my life,

the dream that I see from my open eyes.

You are me and that's why now we are "WE"

But I know the day will come when you will wave me goodbye,

to have life of your own.

But I will always feel your presence in my heart,

as you were with me from the start.

Looking at your precious face,

I pray your life be touched with grace.

I thank angels from above and promise you unending "LOVE"

To LOVE of my life, my most precious gifts by god.

Love you angels

A&N

This poem is dedicated to my beautiful daughters.. I cannot imagine my life without them! Love them to Moon and back.

@Swati Mathur 


“This post is a part of ‘UMeU’ Poetry Blog Hop #UMeUBlogHop organized by Manas Mukul . The hop is brought to you by Soul Craft and You, Me & The Universe.”




48 comments:

  1. "You are me and that's why now we are "WE"..."
    Touching! Such is the unconditional love of a mother.

    Loved this beautiful dedication. Your daughters are lovely.

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    1. Thanks Priyanka... Simple words and each word and feelings are direct from heart.

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  2. Mother daughter relationship beautifully depicted … how complete we feel with the intangible endowments we get from our children. A form of live that’s like an ocean ❤️

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  3. I could relate to this so much, am a single daughter mom to a single daughter

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  4. Beautiful lines poured from the heart, could totally relate to it, Yes children are the angels on earth.

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    1. Yes not less than angels.. They are my life and can bet for all the parents too feel the same for their kids.

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  5. This truly came straight from the heart buddy, I could feel your love for your angels oozing out of your words. Lots of love to them and to you too

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  6. Hearty poem filled with love for your angels, Swati!
    Daughters are the best!
    They will "have a life of their own", but may the love & care be forever.

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    1. Absolutely, our blessings are always with 4th h them.

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  7. Aha! I can feel the mother's love for her lovely angels. You said so right Swati there will be a day come, when these little birdies will fly away with open wings to fulfill their dreams, their path in life, but they can never be far from their mother's heart!Beautiully penned dear!

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    1. Yes no matter how far they go they will always be closer to our heart.

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  8. This was so touching. Straight from a mother's heart. Beautiful.Loads of love to them.

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  9. A lovely dedication. You have given an all new dimension to the theme. Heartfelt one. I am so happy reading this. Daughters are real gem. I wish you would have got the longer comment. I wrote many things. Thank you so much for being a part of the #UMeUBlogHop. Means a lot ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿค—

    #UMeUBlogHop
    #ContemplationOfaJoker #Jokerophilia

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    1. It means a lot coming from you manas.My daughters are my life, as I said this is my first poetry blog hop, so thanks a lot for this opportunity.

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  10. There is nothing greater than a mother's love ! This poem is as pure as the love of a mother towards her off spring ! Love , Love , Love it !!

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    1. Thanks dear.. Your appreciation means a lot.

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  11. A dedication to daughters is truly heartfelt and you have very well shared all the phases of life in this poetry.

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  12. Awww. Such a heartfelt poem about the never-ending love and the gratefulness that a mother feels. Lovely

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  13. Beautiful poem Swati. I am a mother of three daughters and they are world. Really the most precious gift by God.

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  14. Made me think of my daughter too. The poem is so beautifully written and you integrated the theme so well.
    Deepika

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    1. Thanks Deepika.. Lots of love to your daughter too.

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  15. A poem that tells about the selfless love of a mother who finds their daughters filling the air she is breathing. Truly loved every line.

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  16. Beautifully expressed, Swati. Your love for your daughters comes through so well. Daughters are a blessing and you are twice blessed!
    Mayuri/Sirimiri

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  17. After reading your poem he first thing I did is I gave a kiss to my daughter. You have depicted a mother's emotions beautifully.

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    1. Aww.. Do sweet.. Lots of love to her. Thanks for the appreciation

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  18. I have always found it difficult to express motherhood as an emotion in a poem. You have done it so beautifully.God bless your little angels and you always :)

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  19. Daughters are angels and indeed blessing from above....you are lucky for you have two..
    Doubly blessed.

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  20. I'm sure your kids would be elated to read this poem. Beautifully expressed emotions of love!

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  21. Such an endearing and heartwarming poem. Can so relate to it being a mother to 2 daughters myself๐Ÿ˜

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  22. So well could resonate, a feel of a mother with her small world of happiness, where all mornings start and will stay forever till breaths of Life.
    Just so beautifully penned.

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  23. This is so beautiful Swati. I have a daughter and I can understand your feelings. They are gems. The entire poem is heartfelt but "You are me and that's why now we are "WE"" - this line stole my heart.

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  24. Aww so beautiful and completely relatable. being a mom of two beautiful girls, I can co relate with each and every emotion, you have expressed here. they are my creative inspiration and reason to learn many new things everyday.

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  25. This is such a beautiful an heart touching poem Swati, I can so much in love with this and can relate so well with the thought you have shared!!

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  26. I have daughters too. Can God! could relate with your words so much! love every word that you have written.

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  27. Children bring so much joy in our lives. Its just amazing how you have penned these lines. I could resonate with them as I have a daughter and a son - I share different relationships with both but they are my universe. Keep writing and spreading joy.

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  28. A mother's heart and her love just poured out as words. A beautiful dedication to your daughters. Kids do expand our heart, purpose and joy.

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  29. These lines are so wonderful. I am a mom to a daughter and I can relate to this poem so well.

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  30. This is so beautiful, Swati! I know how our hearts melt for our daughters although someday they'll fly the nest one day. I read it twice already. ❤️

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  31. This is a very nice outpouring of your love for your angels in verse. The poem is heart touching and reflects your love for your daughters.

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  32. What a beautiful poem, a special ode to your daughters! I have a daughter too and like you, even I cannot imagine my life without her! Your post made me very nostalgic and happy as well.

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