Friday, February 27, 2015

A Mom's Heart : Poetry

I remember those wonderful days 
When you wrapped me tightly in you arms, close to your heart

I remember when you helped me
in every  decision of life because that's the toughest time,

I remember your tight hugs when I am feeling low
because you have all the love to show

I remember you supporting me 
When whole world seems to be accusing me

I remember you wiping my tears
when I face my deepest fear

I remember when you shout at me
because you wanted best for me

Mom, I wish I have you by my side
I love you and thank you for all you did for me
and hope someday I make you proud for whatever comes to be

I wish you were here, mom I miss you so much
no one knows what I would give for just one touch.

@ Swati

This Post got published in Writers Enzine  online magazine


  1. Thanks kim
    because this mom's note is for our special mothers who are far away from us but still tense about our children also
    NO body on earth can replace her in our hearts

  2. It's so touching...heart-felt words...

  3. Very warm, heart-felt and touching words... beautiful Swati :)

  4. Moms are just like that...A touching piece, so beautifully weaved!

  5. That’s so touchy Swati. Mom’s live is selfless and we understand that when we become a mother. She knows the right words, right gesture at the right time.

  6. This poem is so heart touching and beautifully written. I miss my mom a lot and you have touched the soul by your words!!

  7. Yes moms are best creation of god and they are always ready to shower self less love and care on their kids. loved the way, you have expressed this beautiful emotion and relation in this poem.

  8. Such a beautiful poem! Moms show their love and care through their anger too. Wish I could hug my mom and tell her I love her too.

  9. What a beautiful poem you have written for your mom. It's heart touching , loved the way you have penned it. She deserves all the love

  10. That was a very emotional poem, Swati. I am so glad you expressed your feelings so beautifully through this poem. I will share this poem with my mom today.

  11. What a sweet and poignant poem. Moms are the best and this poem is a fitting ode to motherhood. Very nice and touching poem.

  12. A poetry is considered to be well written when you can feel the emotions of the poet through words. I absolutely loved reading this, beautifully penned :)

  13. The best thing that the human experiences is the love of the mother which is so unconditional and pure. There is nothing like a mother's love.

  14. This is a beautiful ode to motherhood. moms are like that- full of selfless love.

  15. Swati, maa/mom/mother/mummy these words have eternal meaning in our lives. I can relate to every word of this poem and so miss my mother. Its been 11 years that I have lost her but the pain is still fresh. She can never be replaced by anyone on earth.

  16. I miss my mom like you dear, very well expressed! I loved your composition buddy, short and sweet

  17. This poem is truly heart touching. Loved the way you have penned the depth of a mother's selfless love towards her children.